Reflection sheet for Q5 Language Paper 1 2019

Reflection sheet produced for our students including a typed response for Q5 from the script of a student who achieved G9 overall ... MORE

Reflection sheet for Q4 Language Paper 1 2019

Reflection sheet produced for our students including a typed response to Q4 from a student who achieved G9 overall ... MORE

Reflection sheet for Q3 Language Paper 1 2019

Reflection sheet for our students included a typed exemplar from the script of a student who achieved G9 overall ... MORE

Reflection sheet for Q2 Language Paper 1 2019

A sheet including a typed response for Q2 taken from the script of a student who achieved a G9 overall ... MORE

Paper 1 Section B Guided Structure for LAPs

I used this with a small group of lower attaining pupils who had poor working memory. The video links in the ppt are from Youtube where someone filmed a drive around our local area. I used that as the stimulus point to help the class write a short narrative that described a journey where they had to move home.... MORE

Scrooge Language Paper 1

A worksheet for Paper 1 Q2 based on Scrooge in ACC. Could be used for homework or cover.... MORE

English Language Paper 1 Section B Revision 6/15

Day by day revision tasks for English Language Paper 1 Section B week 6/15... MORE

English Language Paper 1 Section A Revision 5/15

Day by day revision tasks for English Language Paper 1 Section A week 5.... MORE

Q3 structure plan sheet

Quick creation for students to plan the 'reader journey' the writer takes them on. Used with a LA class. Worked quite well.... MORE

Form Wordcloud

For teaching and revising form.... MORE

Word clouds for language and structure

Wordclouds for teaching and revising language and structure.... MORE

AQA Paper 1 Question 3 Structure

A90 minute lesson on structure (AQA P1 Q3) using a short BFI film rather than a written text. Used with FE re-sit students. Folder includes: PPT, differentiated paragraph plans, example answer.The film hyperlink is embedded in the picture on slide 7. I wrote the model answer so please feel free to amend, improve, grade, deconstruct or ignore - whichever is most useful!... MORE

January Revision Newsletter

My latest edition of the English Revision Newsletter. Have lifted some activities from various places. Front sheet focuses on language, back focuses on literature. Hope it helps in some way.... MORE

English Language Paper 1 Section B Revision 2/15

Day by day revision tasks for English Language Paper 1 Section B week 2... MORE

Analysing Language - prison experience.

Analysing language features.... MORE

English Language Paper 1 Section A Revision 1/15

Day by day revision tasks for English Language Paper 1 Section A week 1.... MORE

Level 1 and Level 2 Creative Writing - spot what not to do

This is a mock-up of a Paper 1 Q5 answer (in response to the Jun 19 'Abandoned' task) featuring lots of cliches and errors.To be used to show students what not to do and why.Would also suit KS3 students.... MORE

Catchphrase Quiz for Language Techniques

A PowerPoint presentation, based on the TV show - Catchphrase. Each slide is intended to help students revise language techniques and parts of speech. Great to use as a revision resource or a connect activity.... MORE

Eduqas GCSE English Language mock exam cover sheet, using June 2019 exam and 2019 grade boundaries component 1

Cover sheet for a mock exam, with mark scheme and grade boundaries from the summer 2019 exam... MORE

The Hate U Give

A series of lesson looking at the novel 'The Hate U Give'. Resources include an extract from the text to support Language Paper 1 teaching and two non-fiction sources to also develop Language Paper 2 skills.... MORE

It Stephen King Paper 1

A few disorganised bits and bobs on 'It' relating to AQA Paper 1 Language... MORE

Fiction Writing Practice Booklet

This is a collection of creative writing tasks for use as practice for Language Paper 1 Section B. It includes a range of photos (different styles including wider scenes and close ups), and a variety of written tasks. I added a mark scheme when I copied it for my Year 11s so that they could self and peer assess. Even my more stubborn students found a task they were inspired by...... MORE

Christmas AQA style describe / narrate picture stimulus and sample answers

Picture stimulus for AQA 1b task2 x teacher models plus student answer from an unusual perspective to discussSenses chart and slide re: drop, shift, zoom in, zoom out... MORE

2014 Sainsbury's Christmas Advert Narrative Writing

Approximately 3 lessons of narrative writing based on the 2014 Sainsbury's Christmas advert. There is a brief reference to the Wilfred Owen poem 'Exposure' but as this was created to also be delivered by long term supply this is not too in depth.... MORE

The Lovely Bones - Paper 1 Lang Q1-4

Mocked up paper for Lovely Bones using the opening 4 paragraphs . Used to demonstrate the use of paragraphs for structure. My struggling Yr 11's finally got it!... MORE

Language Paper 1 Q2 Woman In Black

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Silence of the Lambs Paper 1

A quick tour through the start of the Thomas Harris novel, focusing on Paper 1 skills. Beware, it has a swear word!... MORE

Opening of 'It' by Stephen King

The opening of 'It' with questions based on Eduqas Paper 1. Beware - there is a swear word!... MORE

The Disappointment - Writing to a Plan

A writing lesson, focusing on building atmosphere and culminating in a story based on KFC's chicken shortage.... MORE

A Thousand Splendid Suns Paper 1, Q4 mat.

I created this for my Y11s, studying AQA English Language, paper 1, question 4.It is fairly scaffolded and requires minimal input but gives scope for great feedback.... MORE

Descriptive writing practice- advent calendar

I spent a while creating this and it can be edited in whichever way you choose to use it.... MORE

December Year 11 Revision Newsletter

This is the second revision newsletter that I will be sending out to Year 11 parents and students. Hope it helps.... MORE

Paper 1 Breakdown Bundle

A bundle of PowerPoints with extract and activity sheet printables that breakdown each question in paper 1.... MORE

Paddy Clarke Ha Ha Ha Low Ability KS4 (Extract)

Extract from Paddy Clarke Ha Ha Ha to go with PowerPoint presentation. It's a short extract for lower ability pupils.... MORE

Paddy Clarke Ha Ha Ha Low Ability KS4

Short activities based around a short extract from Paddy Clarke Ha Ha Ha. Games/competition focus to engage low ability group.... MORE

Year 11 Revision Newsletter

I have created a Year 11 Revision Newsletter, the first side focuses on language, the second side on literature. I have adapted some ideas taken from the facebook feed (the controversial statements) and other places.I am going to be releasing these to year 11 every two weeks, they are also been sent home to parents. Hopefully, we won't hear the dreaded question "how do you revise for English?" anymore!... MORE

Creative dystopian writing

A PowerPoint which focuses on the tsunami scene in 'The Day After Tomorrow' and a planning worksheet to get students to think about using a range of techniques. ... MORE

Retrieval Practice Advent Calendar

An advent calendar that focuses on all English Lit and Lang papers to use as starters or plenary. There are recall questions and allow students time to plan a response and write the first paragraph, or identification/sequence type activities every day in December.All of the images on slide 1 are hyperlinked (don't click the number, click the image) and will go directly to the date.I see my year 11s every day, so I would do 2 on a Friday and 2 on a Monday, But you could reduce the number that you have on the slide.The Literature units that this focuses on are: Frankenstein, R & J, DNA and Power and Conflict.There is also a Jingle Bells audio on it - just for fun! This, of course, is optional!... MORE

What How Why scaffolded table

Scaffolded table with prompt questions and sentence started to support students writing.... MORE

Frankenstein Paper 1 Q1 - 3

Paper 1 Q1 - 3, using Mr Bruff sample answers.... MORE

The Kite Runner and Questions

The Opening of 'The Kite Runner' by Khaled Hosseini with some questions in the style of Paper 1. Could be used in class, as a cover lesson or homework.... MORE

The Lottery and Questions

Shirley Jackson's classic short story, 'The Lottery', with a range of questions. Suitable for discussion as a whole class - I have used these questions on a Powerpoint for a series of successful lessons, but this is a self-contained resource so could also work for cover or homework. The focus is mainly on improving the planning and quality of creative writing.... MORE

The Graveyard Book Extract with Paper 1 style questions

Opening of 'The Graveyard Book' by Neil Gaiman with Paper 1 style questions. The creative writing suggestions may not be suitable for class usage - this was developed for a very specific student!... MORE

On the Sidewalk Bleeding with reading and writing questions

A classic short story with reading questions and a writing task. Could be used for cover or a standalone lesson.... MORE

Paper 1 Quick Mats

Exam papers put onto one sheet to be photocopied onto A3 for quick planning of answers... MORE

2019 Language Paper 1 Mock Marking

2019 Language Paper 1 Mock feedback to class power point with Targets for marking, examples and indicative comments from Exam board.... MORE

Display Structural Techniques

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Paper 1 Q5 images

Collection of images for descriptive task for Paper 1, Q5... MORE

Structure Diagram Paper 1 Question 3

A revision diagram to support students with the structure question on language paper 1.... MORE

English Language Breakdown

A breakdown of what the two language papers will look like including AO breakdown, what sections will change and some sample questions... MORE

Exemplar Level 4 AQA paper 1 Language June 2019

May be helpful for students. Hope it is legible!... MORE

Fantastic Beasts and Curious Creatures (Language Skills Mini SOW)

A series of lessons and accompanying extract booklet linked to the theme of animals, designed to develop Language skills (AQA). Partially uploaded as some lessons relied heavily on resources from paid sites e.g. Twinkl. Suited for both KS3 and KS4.... MORE

Walking talking mock PPT AQA Language Paper 1

Coaching session for Paper 1. We do this in the exam hall, in exam conditions but they make notes in the coaching parts and then 'do' the task in the timed pauses between questions.... MORE

3 2 1 flashback

A very simple technique to provide a structure to begin Paper 1 Qu 5 response to a picture prompt. As mentioned on the FB chat Oct 2019.... MORE

Paper 1 Question 5

Descriptive writing from June 2018 Paper 1 exam... MORE

Analysing Language Worksheet

A template to help low ability students access high marks... MORE

Language and Literature Advice for Parents and Students

This is an advice sheet I give to parents at Parents' Evening and email out to students copying HOY in so that they are aware of tips for sessions where they are hosting students. The language tips are generic but the Lit tips are specific to the texts I teach and can be easily tweaked. I provide my email address at the end.Use as a base to add to.... MORE

Short story home learning booklet

Each story is accompanied with a brief set of questions. The questions are largely just to check understanding and prompt a few ideas as I wanted the emphasis to be on actually reading (and enjoying) a story. I have tried to select a range of stories both in length and style.... MORE

Introduction to structure using the opening to Baby Driver

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Structure- I Am Legend

Scaffolded approach to question 3. Use the film start to question why camera angles happen, character zooming etc. repeat same activity with an extract using the grid before writing up the response.... MORE

Paper 1, Question 5 Storm Intervention

Pupils use the structure strip to add to any story - storm hits, then aftermath of storm. Change the picture but keep the same descriptions. A storm can hit any picture.... MORE

English Language Paper 1, Question 5 - Shifting the gear (Intervention)

A series of lessons designed as an in class intervention to improve Paper 1, Question 5 responses. There are a series of 5 lessons, plus a few additional lessons if needed and was designed to be delivered over a 2 week period. It's aimed at 3/4 and possibly 4/5 borderline students and not for high ability.... MORE

Lang Paper 1 Q2 Heavily Scaffolded Worksheet

Used with very LPA Year 10 students. Adaptable. Uses the Alex Cold extract.... MORE

Imagery Worksheet

Used with LPA Year 10 class for Lang analysis leading to creative writing using imagery. Adaptable.... MORE

Jaws - Paper 1, Question 3 on Structure

Comprises of: PowerPoint presentation, insert, questions 1 and 3, questions & notes, individual paragraphs to be cut up so students can rearrange into the correct order.... MORE

Genesis and Catastrophe - Roald Dahl lessons exploring writer's craft

A short story by Dahl with a series of comprehension questions and 4 lessons that take students through the text exploring language, structure and then crafting a piece of creative writing.... MORE

Only This - Introductory lessons exploring writer's craft

A short story by Dahl with a series of comprehension questions and 4 lessons that take students through the text exploring language, structure and then crafting a piece of creative writing.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Exam Preparation Booklet

A collection of fiction extracts with accompanying questions for each text to help students prepare for AQA Language Paper 1 Creative Reading and Writing. This is what our staff will use this year for year 11 lessons.... MORE

AQA English Language Paper 1 Q3 Structure

AQA Language Paper 1 Question 3 using The Lion King as a stimulus.... MORE

Creative Writing (Jelly)

A series of creative writing lessons guiding students through common errors on Paper 1, Question 5. ... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'The Chain' (Adrian McKinty)

Intended as independent revision resource but could be used as a teaching resource either.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Welcome to Lagos' (Chibundu Onuzo)

Intended as independent revision resource but could be used as a teaching resource either.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Washington Black (middle)' (Esi Edugyan)

Intended as independent revision resource but could be used as a teaching resource either.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Washington Black (opening)' (Esi Edugyan)

Intended as independent revision resource but could be used as a teaching resource either.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Half A Yellow Sun' (Chimamanda Ngozie Adichie)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'White Teeth' (Zadie Smith)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Shadow of the Wind' (Carlos Ruiz Zafron )

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'The Chalk Man' (C. J. Tudor)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Anita and Me' (Meera Syal)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Their Eyes Were Watching God' (Zora Neale Hurston)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'The Amber Spyglass' (Philip Pullman)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'The Hate U Give' (Angie Thomas)

Intended as a revision resource for independent study but could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Paper Ghosts' (Julia Heaberlin)

Sample GCSE Language Paper 1 created using 'Paper Ghosts' by Julia Heaberlin. This was intended to be used as part of a revision booklet for independent study however could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

GCSE Language Paper 1 sample paper 'Homegoing' (Yaa Gyasi)

Sample GCSE Language Paper 1 created using'Homegoing' by Yaa Gyasi. This was intended to be used as part of a revision booklet for independent study however could also be used as a teaching resource.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Q1-4 Revision Lessons

By the last term of Y11, my department stopped following a medium term plan as each teacher's class had differing needs. Therefore we created a bank of revision lessons for P1 Q1-4 as and when we felt our classes need them. This is the end result. Many of the lessons are standalone so you can pick and choose which ones to use.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Question 2

A SoW on P1 Q1 and Q2 used with the top end of Y10 during AUT1. Pupils are exposed to a range of texts throughout the SoW and there is also a lesson on assessing model examples using the mark scheme. It's 6 weeks of worth of lessons so have a browse as many of the lessons are standalone so you can pick and choose which ones you'd like to use.... MORE

Banned Bunting

Bunting which tells you off. A small amount of work (cutting and attaching string) to make a visual classroom display on "banned phrases" and how to improve them. Wroked well for my students last year, especially if you get them up early on in the year. ... MORE

Jaws Text (PowerPoint also available)

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Jaws PowerPoint (low ability)

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Y9 Conflict SOW

This is a Language Paper 1 (with some Language Paper 2) (AQA) scheme of work by @mrsmdatherton/@EnglishErdAcad in which students in Y9 explore the different types of conflict (man v man, man v self, man v society and so forth) through different extracts from a range of texts (Hamlet, To Kill a Mockingbird, Dulce et Decorum Est to name a few), exposing them to ideas they will cover throughout the remainder of KS4 (rest of Y9 and Y10/11). It is the first unit completed by students in Y9.Lesson 11 and 14 are assessment lessons. Lesson 11 would be a language paper 1 section A (we generally use AQA's Y9 assessments) and Lesson 14 would be language paper 1 section B.If I have used templates/techniques/sources that are not my own, I have done my best to reference in any slide notes or through HTML links in the texts/SOW overview. If I have inadvertently included something that has not been ascribed to the original creator/owner, please notify me (twitter handle below) and I can either amend or remove. I am an avid follower of #teamenglish and #litdrive, and so if I have missed anything I would like to ensure I give credit where due, as these are both invaluable teams and I would not like to dismiss anyone else's hard work.Feedback is welcome- @mrsmdatherton or @EnglishErdAcad... MORE

Paper 1 Question 3 Structure analysis - Nov 18 paper and Jamaica Inn extract

This resource helps students to analyse structure in an intelligent way.... MORE

Lang Paper 1 Reading and Creative Writing skills - Sunlight on the Grass Short Story Unit

This is an adaptable powerpoint of questions and activities on the openings, characterisation, structure and endings of the AQA Sunlight On The Grass anthology of short stories suitable for teaching students skills for Paper 1 on the current specification.... MORE

Cheat sheet Question 5 paper 1

This a sheet to be given to or stuck in students books that they can regularly refer to when practicing question 5 paper 1. It has key vocabulary, sentence starters, punctuation and language devices... MORE

BBC 500 words story reading journal

A journal for students to complete- this can well work with Paper 1 Q5 GCSE, or for any Year group really- even Year 7!... MORE

Creative Writing: Lost

This was created using Pobble 365 as a foundation.... MORE

Creative Writing inspired by image: The Magic Library

This was created using resources from Pobble 365 as a foundation.... MORE

Creative Writing inspired by image: Bride

AQA Question 5 style response to image.... MORE

Reading List for GCSE

A reading list to be shared with Y10 in preparation for GCSE.... MORE

Annotating Skills for Question 4 - Good Omens

Clear and basic guide to annotating a text. Targeted at FE re-sitters grades 1-3.... MORE

Student-friendly mark schemes for Language Papers 1 and 2

This pack has a 'student-friendly' mark scheme for each question on the GCSE Language papers.Each sheet contains the generic mark scheme provided by AQA but alongside each bullet point there is a 'student-friendly' translation and a code for that particular target.The aim is that teachers can tick the appropriate targets for the students to save time writing them out.There is a DIRT sheet attached to each question as well.... MORE

Paper 1 Question 2

A sequence of lessons which tackle each bullet point of the Paper 1 Question 2.Some of the teaching ideas have been inspired by @spryke (Rainbow analysis).... MORE

Song Lyrics

Developing Language Paper 1 skills through song lyrics... MORE

Y10 GCSE English Extract Booklet

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Y11 GCSE English Extract Booklet

Various extracts for Paper 1 and Paper 2.... MORE

Sunlight on the Grass, bridging unit for early KS4 part 2

Part 2: Complete lessons looking at 3 complete stories from Sunlight on the Grass used as a bridging unit for Yr 9 starting KS4 programme of study. Short extracts there too. You'll need the anthology!... MORE

Genres for Creative Writing

A set of ten flashcards, designed to inspire and motivate learners with question five, on paper one. I encourage the learners to think about tone, atmosphere, language features and techniques, structural devices and interesting words and phrases, linked to their chosen genre.... MORE

Weather Inspiration

A set of ten flashcards, designed to inspire and motivate learners with question five, on paper one. I encourage the learners to think about imagery, the five senses and situations that might occur in each of the weather situations.... MORE

Settings and Locations for Creative Writing

A set of twenty flashcards, designed to inspire and motivate learners with question five, on paper one.· ... MORE

Character Cards

A set of twenty flashcards to inspire and motivate learners with creating characters for question five, on paper one. I've tried to include lots of diversity, variety and a bit of quirkiness!· ... MORE

PEACE Clouds

An alternative to PEE and other structures - the clouds.... MORE

Thematic Language Units (12)

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1GeQoPsiy7A8nMo9Y4CNTAWJ07am7AksG?usp=sharingI am unable to upload, even in zipped form, so please follow the link to my google drive. I have written two of twelve planned units so far, and more will be added as they are completed. They are designed to be used either as stand alone lessons, taught as whole units or per paper. The booklet includes all texts but should be clearly labelled. The units all follow a very similar format:Lesson 1 - 19th C NF & P2Q1Lesson 2 - 20th C NF & P2Q3Lesson 3 - P2Q3Lesson 4 - P2Q4Lesson 5 - P2Q5 - with prompt/statementLesson 6 - Fiction extract P1Q1Lesson 7 - P1Q2Lesson 8 - P1Q3Lesson 9 - P1Q4Lesson 10 -Descriptive Prompt (picture)... MORE

English Language Paper One and Two Knowledge Organisers - Section A

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P1 Q5 Descriptive Writing 5 Paragraph Planning Sheet

A planning sheet to help structure descriptive work in 5 paragraphs.... MORE

A Monster Calls Language 1 SoW

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A fun punctuation lesson

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Final Prep before Lang Paper 1 (2018 paper)

A powerpoint made with indicative content and ideas for a top set English group as the last lesson before going into the exam.... MORE

Language Paper One, Questions 2-3

Practice for questions two and three. The text used in "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson.... MORE

Book openings/narrative writing

Opening lines to books to help with P1 Q5.Could be used for KS3.... MORE

Paper 1 revision booklet

I can't remember where I found this (tes or even here possibly!) but it has some good step by step revision or teaching activities for Lang P1. Unfortunately there isn't anything on Q4.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Revision

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Lang 1 Question 3 Worksheet LA (extract from AQA Y9 paper)

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Lang 1 Question 2 Worksheet LA (extract from AQA Y9 paper)

Used with my Y9 group for the end of year exams (AQA Language Paper 1)... MORE

The art of ALLUSION for Language Paper 2

This can be used also for paper one.The emphasis is on showing more cultural capital in writing. My year 11's responded really well to this.May be more suitable for top end but worth a punt with lower end.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Question 5 'Birdsong: Using juxtaposition'

A structured lesson to challenge high-level pupils on utilising language features for purpose. The resource uses the BBC adaption of 'Birdsong' so this will be needed as a supporting resource. ... MORE

Language 1 Reading

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Quick Revision Activities Paper 1

Paper 1 - Questions 2,3 and 4 with very short extracts, writing guides and examples.... MORE

Language paper 1 2019 final tips

Just a rough reminder of key tips.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Revision Booklet

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Last Minute Quick Tips Paper 1 Language

A PowerPoint I created for my final lesson with Year 11 before their exam to remind them how to approach Paper 1 questions, and reminders of how to revise and prepare for the exam.I am planning to use it with the mini Paper One tasks and/or creative writing stimuli material to get them thinking and planning in advance.Please note that my group are a mid-low ability, so some of the suggestions are quite prescriptive.... MORE

Paper 1 Writing using Picture prompts

AQA Section B of Paper 1: Explorations in Creative Writing: Descriptive Writing using Picture Prompts: For Question 5 ‘Write a description suggested by this picture.’This booklet will allow you to practise how to vary sentence structures, use time markers, use less common or ambitious vocabulary, use a topic sentence to begin paragraphs, vary your sentence forms and use linguistic devices.... MORE

Game of Thrones PPT

A PowerPoint to accompany the extracts previously uploaded to the site.... MORE

Paper 1 June 2018 Feedback (with sample answers)

Used to give feedback to students after mock examinations.Written with knowledge from examining AQA Paper 1 in 2018.... MORE

1984 by George Orwell paper 1 questions 1-4

These questions are created by me and some students.No markscheme.... MORE

Lessons to go with ‘Lullaby’ by Elizabeth Berridge (from the AQA Eng lang paper 1 extracts pack)

Here is a powerpoint of a range of lessons, questions and resources to go with‘Lullaby’ by Elizabeth Berridge. The skills focus is evaluation of a viewpoint but there are some helpful things on analysing language and structure as well as a story writing.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Extract Book and Exam Questions

Hi, I have found this document full of extract for Language Paper 1 and exam questions at the back. I share this with my class so they can do some exam questions at home, and I also use some of the extracts in my lessons. There are also a couple of other activities in here but I don't use them.... MORE

Language Paper 1 Question 3 Example Answer - Cyclical Structure

I have attached a Paper 1 Question 3 answer using an extract with a cyclical structure. Unfortunately, I can't remember the extract used by I am trying to find the original so will upload if I find it.Hope this is off some use to everyone.... MORE

Language Paper 1 WTM